It was an early morning and Rome was just beginning to wake up. Tradesmen were opening up their shops and the delicious smell of freshly baked bread was wafting out of the bakeries. It was going to be a blisteringly hot day. As Dylan looked down the balcony he felt happy to be in the most important city in the world, the heart of the mighty Roman Republic. People from across the globe came to admire its glory and there he was living right in the middle of it.
“Dylan, time for breakfast” his mother called out.
Woken from his daydreams he reluctantly went inside. He lived with his parents, and his two brothers in a modest house. Their family wasn’t particularly rich but it was noble. There were stories that they descended from Zeus, Poseidon and Hades, the eldest gods of Greek mythology.
Dylan dreamed of becoming a “DUNKER” player but his parents had other ideas, they wanted him to become a doctor.
Dunker was game played by the local people of the town, in which six people competed with each other on untrained bulls to put a flag on the other bull’s horn.
The new Dunker team players of Rome were chosen and luckily Dylan was also selected.
Everything was going smoothly, but the same year Crallus seized control of Rome. He immediately made a list of his enemies and the people he intended to kill. Crallus was a brilliant military commander but a ruthless man and no friend of Dylan.
One night Dylan was summoned to Crallus’s villa.
“Dylan Darkum Garcus you are my enemy. After all, your uncle Marius was one of my bitterest enemies, but I shall spare you only if you bow down to me.
“Never” Dylan said bravely
“So be it, let your parents die.” Crallus said
Dylan had no option but to listen to him
“Please do not kill them, I am ready to do as you wish” he said with a helpless tone and he bowed.
“Good” Crallus replied
“Send my pirate friends a letter that I am sending somebody whom they have to keep as prisoner for 2 years
He was taken in a ship with 12 soldiers to Pirate Isle. The pirates kept him as prisoner as per Crallus’s orders.
After he was released, one day as Dylan was walking in the forest, he found a sword forged by the gods with a blade that could never be broken. When he picked it up, suddenly he started hearing voices he wasn’t familiar with.
“Dylan, keep this as a gift from me. Will you?” The unknown voice asked
“Who are you?”asked Dylan
“I am Zeus” he said
“I will surely keep it if you ask me to” said Dylan
“But if …..”
Before he could even complete his question, Zeus blew a gust of wind and Dylan was given magical powers. Zeus came in front of him in the form of a golden bird.
The bird said “Use your powers wisely” and it disappeared.
Sahir Munjral is ten year’s old but writes with a great deal of maturity and confidence. Here is his latest story set in Ancient Rome..
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Sahir Munjral is ten year’s old but writes with a great deal of maturity and confidence. Here is his latest story set in Ancient Rome..
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Very interesting story Sahir. Keep up the good work. Well done 👍
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thank you
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That is a great story…such a promising young writer. ❤️ Keep it going. ☺
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thank you !!! i am sorry i could not reply to your comment earlier i have almost finished my next story.
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Fascinating writing. Congrats Sahir. 🙂
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Thanks!
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THANKS
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Love your good sense of imagination. Keep it flowing. You have a talent.
Well done.
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Thank you! i’m sorry i couldn’t reply earlier as i was sick.
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thanks
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Good writing, Sahir, especially because you are so young. This is a wonderful start to what could be an outstanding career as a writer. Good luck!
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Thank you ! i am aware that you had commented long back and i am replying now . i was down with viral .
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Very well written Sahir! Lovely use of vocabulary!
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All ur stories are nothing short of “BRILLIANT “!!
AM SO PROUD OF YOU MY BABY!!
Keep up the good work..and never give up..
Wanting to read the sequels of these stories. .U have got us hooked on!
Love u loads! 🙂
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Amazing Sahir. Congrats Sonia 👍🏻
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Well done great story and I want to find out what happens next.
Kath
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will write kath thanks
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Your thoughts are so mature Sahir . It’s a wonderful story . Keep writing .
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Love the story and very well written 🙂
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Great story, I would definitely try to show things through description of scenery or actions and through speech and body language rather than telling the reader information outright
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thanks!!! i’m sorry i couldn’t reply earlier
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Sahir,
What a wonderful writer you already have become. Growing and learning the tricks of the trade come with writing more, reading books of other writers, and books on the craft. I am amazed at your stories, the maturity of your words, and the voice that comes through loud and clear. Keep writing my friend. Thank you for following my blog and welcome to the fence jumpers. @sheilamgood at Cow Pasture Chronicles
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THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!i am happy you liked my blog. i am sorry i couldn’t reply to your comment earlier as i was sick
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Not a problem. Thanks for stopping by.
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Sahir, you wrote a very good story. My favorite part was when Dylan got a sword form Zeus and got magical powers. Really Good Job!!
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Thank you so much Angad ! I am glad you read and liked my story.It was my favourite part too (when Dylan got the sword).
Will be writing another one shortly, stay tuned! 🙂
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What topic do you suggest I shold write my next story on?
I am writing one on a girl who likes to read and whatever she reades comes true…
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Oh my god!! You’re just 10 years old, you write so well. At least better than me, coming from a 15 years old boy.
Your blog is wonderful and I really appreciate that you took this decision so early. I wish you to be a great author in future!
🙂
Have a great day!! 🙂
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I must say, as an aspiring author, I really enjoyed this! I loved this and I can’t wait to see you continue on with your work. I took keep a blog regarding writing and I’ll be sure to send my viewers your way! Keep up the awesome work.
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I came across your blog & read this story, this is so good, you are a natural writer with great imagination…
I am a new blogger & have just started my own blog at http://www.ishanizone.com, where i share my thoughts on the books i read (i like to read a lot!) & some other experiences.
Your blog is truly inspiring! Please visit mine & give some feedback.
Thanks!
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